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Okazaki Castle
01-26-2007, 07:26 AM
There follows here a chapter from one of the books I've got lying around waiting to publish sometime when things are in place for it. this one covers the characters of two historical personages quite well I'd contend: Kain Doshi, who founded much of ninjutsu, and Sei Shōnagon, who though she did not historically (in terms of recorded, external history) connect to the Geisha arts, nevertheless achieved the pinnacles of mastership of them. Also, it's fun and fiction and is lighter reading. I think it's past magickal applications will be quite evident from even a brief perusal. More a lock in many senses than anything else though...



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The Way of The Small Knife…
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Vengeance shall be Mine saith the Lord.
- YHWH, He Who is Three, The Almighty Trinity (featured in Ezekiel 25:13 and Hebrews 10 : 30)

Piss off and die.
- Khain, son of no-one.


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Scene I

The Planet Vrsa, in galaxy 127-41-330, 734 parsectual cycles prior to the arrival of Magellanic Cloud 67 (aka Galaxy M64)

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The Lord God screamed loud, clear and strong, reaving agony breaking the ullalations of his scream down into racking sobs, as he gasped and choked for air… Khain watched him trying to strain against the ropes which bound him fast, knowing he was trying to scream some more, for the small relief that the vocal release brought to the extreme agony the Lord God was currently in. Khain stood up, walked over to the glade where the Lord God was stretched out, tied and pegged to the bare earth in spreadeagled, face-up form, and casually kicked the ugly fucker in the face. ‘Be silent you poorly-cultured peasant’ he said ‘Though you cannot see it I am trying to appreciate the delicate morning dew on stalks of wheat, whereupon a newly-awakened butterfly even now dries her wings. Your undisciplined screaming is disturbing the morning’s peace and my own wa. You are such a coward. At least your own death you should face with equanimity, as a man.’

‘So’ said Khain ‘Die now and I’ll resurrect you for more torturing later.’ So saying, Khain withdrew two hot irons from the fire burning on the Lord God’s chest, one sharp and one flat like a clothes’ iron with a long handle attached. The sharp one he plunged into YHWH’s third eye point on the forehead and the blunt one he thrust into the Lord God’s groinal region, melting the flesh, bones and sexual organs there clean through, leaving a gaping, dripping hole. ‘You were being irritating’ said Khain ‘So I’ve put your karma on debt, to allow it to gather more weight to itself for a while and then I’ll attend to your further torture later. I have a far more interesting matter to attend to now, one which is more important and pleasurable too.’ So saying, he discarded the now only white-hot irons (they had been glowing a pale blue beforehand…) and turned his attention back to the butterfly unfurling and drying her wings. ‘Arrogant, attention-seeking homosexual fucker’ he muttered under his breath, then took a deeper breath, relaxed, and turned his attention fully to the butterfly and the rising sun, a smile of gentle pleasure beginning to spread across his face, watching the simultaneity of development of the two events….


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Scene II

The House of Sei Shōnagon, Kyoto, 1349

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‘But Ka’in-sama, you must appreciate that these white foreigners will never understand our modes of life or our culture. They are rather undisciplined all the girls have found. And they never wash. In summer sometimes maybe, but in winter they consider washing unhealthy or so I have been reliably informed, by a man who was a doctor of some standing amongst them no less.’

Sei paused in her pouring of the Kombucha twig tea to readjust the sleeve of her kimono, just right, both so that it would not hinder her passing of the delicate porcelain T’ang dynasty cup to her honoured guest, yet also so that the action might allow the late afternoon light to delicately play upon the woven gold threading of the inner sleeve and hem lining.

Khain said nothing. He was like that.

Sei sighed gently. ‘What I mean Ka’in-sama, is that these barbarians from abroad are weak to the point of impotency. Barely a man amongst them can hold his seed with one of the better-trained girls for longer than a few seconds. It is considered a miracle amongst them if they manage to last for over three minutes. In fact Kaori-dono has for a while been running a book, taking bets to see which of them can last more than 2 minutes when even the basic milking techniques of only the third Shungya school are used. Hardly that is even normally necessary. The greater warmth of the Japanese pussy being all that most of them can stand.’

‘Hnnm’ said Khain. Turning to the younger Geisha recently completed in her training seated to Sei’s left he asked: ‘And what does that tell you Kitsune-san?’ Looking back at Sei he stated ‘Piss of with this tea shit. Bring me saké, hot. You know my tastes and that I mislike tea from your hand once you’ve stopped lying for the sake of the initial formalities.’

Kitsune giggled slightly behind her hand, Khain turned his eyes briefly to her, and Sei poured the already-hot sake into the second cup she already had prepared, hot, for Khain’s saké. ‘Hrmmmm’ said Khain ‘Excellent. Find some Buddhist priest to give the tea to, they always like that sort of thing, makes them feel righteous and profound.’

Kitsune made bold: ‘If I might suggest it Khain-sama, the emissary from the Chinese Emperor is visiting our humble abode, in the humble but resplendent rooms that those greedy, showy Chinese always favour. Would he not be an ideal candidate for your discarded tea?’ She lifted her eyes from the traditionally expected posture of demureness to an honoured guest of Khain’s status, looking him full in the eyes as she spoke.

‘Ha! said Khain ‘Very good Kitsune. I see you hold great promise for one so young. Indeed, the Chinese emissary would make an excellent choice for that particular gift. Sei, send one of the boneless men to give it to him as a gift of the house.’

‘Would it not be funnier and more insulting Ka’in-sama if we made the tea cold first and told the arrogant Chinese fucker that it was a special Japanese delicacy?’

‘Excellent’ said Khain ‘You do always come up with some of the best ideas Sei. See why she is mistress of this Ryokan Kitsune? Always one can learn from her, even I. I suppose it would be remiss if we poisoned him on the premises tonight. Make sure that the boneless man takes his soul using the hidden ninth form. I felt his soul when he entered our house, they sent one of their more advanced masters for a change.’ Khain said the term ‘master’ with a sneer, accompanied by a curl of his lip, which made his opinion abundantly clear on what he thought of the visiting Chinese emissary’s supposedly high level of esoteric development. After all, no true martial arts - or other - master had ever consented to work for the corrupt imperial dynasties of China for many centuries now.

‘It will be as you say Ka’in-sama’ replied Sei with a warm, slightly pleased, amused and sultry smile, parting her lips just enough to reveal her teeth a little. ‘Perhaps now Kitsune-dono would like to enlighten us as to how the wide-eyes’ utter lack of ability to control their bestial ejaculatory urges any longer than a rabid dog could connects to their distaste for washing in the winter?’

‘Well, it means that their chi is weak does it not Mistress Sei?’ said Kitsune with an innocent-looking simper containing only slight sarcasm in the tonal level at which it was pitched ‘And so’, she continued ‘They do not have the power in their haras for their systems to survive the regular ‘shock’ of baths in the winter months. We, the girls, notice the same thing in the way that the gai-jin are unable to take hot baths: the water must always be somewhat tepid for all of them… What is pleasant and undemanding for us, stresses and overstrains the bodies and nervous systems of even the strongest amongst them… With one or two exceptions’, she added with a smile.

‘And where does strength lie and originate from Kitsune-chan?’ asked Khain.

‘Whatever could you mean Khain-sama?’ Asked Kitsune, all wide-eyed innocence.

‘Hrmm’ Said Khain ‘Ha ha ha! Excellent! You have taught her well Sei-san.’

Sei inclined her head in acknowledgment, smiling gently and allowing her arm to brush just a little across Khain’s shoulder as she moved to stand and walk over to the far side of the room, opening the screens to allow the moon’s first rays of light to filter in past the gentle candlelight of the red lanterns positioned on the porch outside the door.

Sei returned, sat next to Khain, and said ‘So you see Ka’in-sama, these Westerners are weak and only able to handle weak approaches. Anything of strength and vitality they cannot handle, it overloads their meridians and they have neither the ki in their haras nor the strength in their meridian structures to cope with it. But, because they are men, they like to view themselves as men, as brave and strong. So they invent something they call ‘morality’ to restrain each other. It is action according to this code of ‘morality’ that they term virtuous and claim that all men should live.’

‘This… ‘mo-ra-li-tee’…’ said Khain, pausing as he tried to pronounce this foreign word ‘How is this connected to de, the virtue of which the Lao Tzu speaks?’

‘Why, it is not at all connected to it Ka’in-sama. It is a uniquely barbarian concept with, thankfully, no corresponding oriental concept even in Chinese thought.’ Sei replied.

Khain raised an eyebrow, expecting Sei to continue, understanding what he sought, anticipating it and providing it for him. He was like that too.

‘Well Ka’in-sama’ continued Sei ‘Imagine that you had no strength and yet wanted to view yourself as strong without developing any strength yourself.’

‘Then I would become a merchant and hire mercenary Ronin. Or join with many other men like me, weak but of large bodies perhaps, and form a bandit clan, bullying peasants for bushels of rice, buttons and cheap millet wine. There are many such in Japan. Is that what this mo-ra-lee-ti is?’

‘Not quite, but close Ka’in-sama. In short they understand that the most necessary part of virtue is strength but they do not understand that true strength proceeds from harmony with the order of heaven, they think that strength is something which they must enforce with their own aggressive behaviour.’

‘Indeed, that is why they have no understanding of honour, most of these barbarians’ interjected Kitsune with a slight pout.

‘You must excuse Kitsune-chan Ka’in-dono. She is a little, ah… infatuated with a rather… ah… presentable young man from the Western nation known as Al-geria’ smiled Sei, with a look of some pleased indulgence towards Kitsune. For truly Sei not only didn’t mind Kitsune’s interjection, she was rather pleased by it. Sei was never fond of sharing Khain’s attentions in the bedroom – whilst Khain himself was quite known for his fondness of several bed partners of a night. Hopefully he would leave the young girl out of his nighttime plans if he thought her mind and heart’s attentions were focused elsewhere…

‘Essentially it is that they confuse self-discipline with self-restriction, master’, said Kosantera, speaking for the first time since he had entered the room silently and to no comment to deliver the now-empty teapot that he had taken equally silently to the Chinese emissary beforehand. ‘Consequently, they continually seek to restrict the self rather than to develop the self. The key step which they miss out in the self-developmental process is the stage of seeking to know their own natures and studying the nature of the harmony of heaven.’

‘Rather like our peasants then’ said Khain ‘ They believe that power comes from assertion rather than from a stable hara and connection to the harmony and power inherent in the scheme of things and one’s own nature. Could it be that gai-jin are just Japanese peasants with different coloured skins?’

‘Ah, no Ka’in-sama, that is what I was trying to tell you at the beginning. The big difference between the gai-jin and our peasants is that, whilst our peasants are aggressive because they know no better, lacking education but never presuming to raise their eyes to claim an equal status with their Samurai lords, these gai-jin claim that they are actually superior to all other persons. So does their God and religion teach them.’

‘How can they claim this when they have no strength of their own but only that of the mob united? Are there no Samurai in gai-jin land to discipline their lower classes?’ asked Khain.

‘Unfortunately Sir, their ‘upper classes’ as you term them are amongst the worst offenders we have found: half of them are drunkards and the other half clergy. No true warrior class exists there, they all rove around in packs as well and none of them would even consider attacking so much as a large group of peasants alone, let alone a state or nation as is expected by you of your kunoichi. Strength means numbers of troops for them, it would seem.’ Kosantera replied.

‘Hmmm, fascinating as a psychology.’ said Khain ‘Tell me, if they are so undeveloped how did they manage to come to our shores with their ships and disturb our wa with their stinking behaviours?’

Sei Shōnagon, mistress of the leading Ryokan in Kyoto and indeed all of Japan and Kitsune, her First Student, though still young, looked at each other and paused, not sure what to say at that. Sei broke the silence first. ‘We have discussed this matter amongst ourselves for some time whilst your Lordship was away attending to the mountain-kami… and we have been unable to come to any conclusion other than that it must be the work of your… ah… guest from afar. We believe he brought them here to trap their souls for some dark purposes of his own.’

Khain’s eyes widened not at all at that statement, though they did flicker a little. He paused a moment, thinking. ‘Why would he who we no longer name invite such inferior persons to the Land of the Gods and Flowing Waters? Surely they can be of no significance in his schemes of things, and we hardly need more slave classes here, we are full enough as it is, with all our labour and material needs amply provided for…’

None had any answer they could offer, though Sei did sit patiently, as if thoughtfully considering a topic she had oft pondered before in contemplations that were not entirely fruitless. ‘Perhaps, Lord Khain’ she said, using his War title herself for the first time ‘Perhaps he who we no longer name wishes to use these barbarians as targeting devices?’

‘The same thought did occur to me Lady Sei’ replied the Lord Khain. And he continued: ‘That would make it a case of the principle command. The rest of you leave us. We have matters of import to discuss.’

When the rest had left, Khain stretched our languorously, pulled Sei close and said ‘Next time, have a woman of developed skill waiting as well, you know my tastes. Meanwhile though, it has been 89 years this time. Those mountains and meditating under waterfalls… tend to lose a man when he’s a-wanderin’ the paths between the worlds….So, let’s fuck!’ And they did. Lots. And never did bother to discuss the barbarians’ incursion. If they’d made it to the Land of the Gods they could wait whatever pleasure the Nameless One had brought them there for. They were hardly of consequence in anything anyway, though maybe they would prove useful in some way later. The Nameless One never did put a foot wrong, all knew that, even Khain who was rarely one to yield strength or competence greater to another. But the Nameless One was the Nameless One after all… And no, the Nameless One wasn’t Pei Chu’an. That was Kosanteru, Khain had picked up that occupation of the boneless man’s form as soon as he returned from the Chinese emissary… and received the message intended for him from Pei Chu’an through those means also. Not that he said a word about that to the women. They had more important things to concern their pretty little heads and tight, firm legs with in his esteemed consideration… And it was to such matters of greater comparable consequence that Khain, Lord of War, now turned his attention to in the House of Sei Shōnagon, Supreme Mistress of the Pleasure Arts of the Night…

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Regards all,
Okazaki Kyoshiru.

Okazaki Castle
01-26-2007, 07:34 AM
Comments and critiques are invited. Both on literary style and quality plus, if any so wish and find it relevant, on magickal technique.

all the best all,
Oazaki.

Oblio
01-26-2007, 08:14 AM
I like the feel of it.. I can see some very cool things going on with the torture of god :D

Khain stood up, walked over to the glade where the Lord God was stretched out, tied and pegged to the bare earth in spreadeagled, face-up form, and casually kicked the ugly fucker in the face.
Gold!

Although, I think punchier prose would really enhance the story telling.

For instance:
The sharp one he plunged into YHWH’s third eye point on the forehead and the blunt one he thrust into the Lord God’s groinal region, melting the flesh, bones and sexual organs there clean through, leaving a gaping, dripping hole.

I would suggest cutting out needles description (this would be the biggest thing that breaks up the flow of your story for me) - so:

The sharp one he plunged into YHWH's third eye point. The blunt one, he thrust into the Lord God's groin, melting the flesh, bones and sexual organs clean through - leaving a gaping, dripping hole.


I'll continue if that's cool:
‘You were being irritating’ said Khain ‘So I’ve put your karma on debt, to allow it to gather more weight to itself for a while and then I’ll attend to your further torture later. I have a far more interesting matter to attend to now, one which is more important and pleasurable too.’ So saying, he discarded the now only white-hot irons (they had been glowing a pale blue beforehand…) and turned his attention back to the butterfly unfurling and drying her wings.

There's a thousand different ways of saying the same sentence, so I'll just pick one as an example of what I think is more compelling writing, take it or leave it :D

'You were getting irritating' said Khain 'so I've put your karma on debt, to gather weight for a while.. I'll attend to your further torture in time. For now, I have more interesting, and important matters that await my pleasure.' So saying, Khain discarded the white-hot irons and turned his attention back to the butterfly unfurling and drying her wings.

Losing details like the heat of the pokers is not critical to the story, keeping it in redirects attention to the earlier part of the sentence for no good reason, when what I'd rather focus on is Khain's transcendent appreciation of the butterfly (helps with building his character as well).

Also, some of your paragraphs could do with better chunking to help the reader get what you want them to get - the simplest way of doing this is breaking longer paragraphs into shorter expressions of one or two ideas. I'd probably start a new paragraph between the two passages I edited..


Changes like this may seem pedantic, but cutting out the occasional word is the fastest way of getting clearer writing :)



[Have you read any Neil Gaiman? - Particularly American Gods... I recommend it, if you feel like absorbing other styles that is!]

Naomi
01-26-2007, 10:23 AM
Good descriptive style, but watch the run-on sentences. Instead of four or five descriptive words, try cutting it down to a few of the more relevant ones. I like the butterfly part. Replace 'oriental' with eastern...asians hate being called orientals, it reminds them of persian rugs and is only used to describe objects.

Oh try describing the rooms and enviroment before you jump into the dialogue.

Hahah, Kain's such a bastard. Gotta love him.

I liked all of the characters! Brings back memories!

I've been working on another history of the solar system, so I'll take this as a sign we should probably get to work on dumping this bomb on the human race soon?

Okazaki Castle
01-26-2007, 01:21 PM
Ok so simplify a bit and be more direct, but also include more scene-setting and descriptive material to create more atmosphere and make it more novel, less script like. Cool will incorporate those changes, see what I come up with... Glad you like it btw!

As for dropping bombs on humanity, heck yes, let's get this show on the road :D:D!! One can only twiddle one's thumbs for so long...

all the best,
Oaz.

Kuroyagi
01-26-2007, 04:07 PM
Ah I remember, some funny stuff! Have you read her book?

fr.novumorganum
01-26-2007, 04:10 PM
discover the power of the semi-colon; its a very nice tool for long powerful correct sentences. (ie Milton and Melville)

Kuroyagi
01-29-2007, 07:44 PM
Yeah I like it too (to see it used professionallly I mean, though it is not my own predilection). Schopenhauer is a master of the semi-colon, actually. Very nice writing there!

Well, about Sei Shonagon: I found her book amusing. Its depicting the life of a noble court-dame in the hmmm- about the early 11th. century IIRC. Sometimes one wouldnt think that those utterly concise and even funny snipets of everyday life have been written ~1000yrs ago in another country and culture! Sometimes shes even mediocre or banal! Some fun it is anyway.

Naomi
05-21-2007, 10:36 PM
Hmm mayhaps i'll rethink that title. I wrote this in February, and it does belong in one of the chapters of Okazaki Castle's book. (thus, I donate it, as it is my story)

Chapter 1



Raven opened one eye and gazed across the endless darkness between the stars. The gently twinkling patterns that encircled those brighter orbs spoke to him that he had arrived. The glow of Sirius shone brightly, a reminder behind him of the decay poisoning the harmony of the celestial abode Gracefully he alighted on a small meteor just on the edge of the star system. Observing the calmness of the planets circling their sun, he delighted in the sheer simplicity of the plane he had descended upon. Most gods never looked back to the roots after shedding their mortality, not until the land that had harbored their first mortal life had turned to dust. Raven had never lost touch with the Great Mother, and he attributed his frequent dives into the Abyss directly to his peerless stature amongst the so-called elder gods. Lesser beings often fooled themselves into thinking that it was they who commanded the Abyss. When one of her strange daughters drifted astray from intergalactic currents into their little world, they would be brought low, and Raven would laugh at their ignorance. The ways of far shores are bewildering at any level of the game.

Something strange had caught his eye near this region, a disharmonious input was emanating through the entire Milky Way. There had already been serious implications elsewhere, beyond this galaxy. Entire worlds had been destroyed. Soul groups of billions were demanding answers, and justice. A thread of mendacious disease was infecting each galaxy one by one. He had tracked the anomaly to this galaxy, and then to the most volatile sector, and finally, this star. At first it had appeared to be coming from the nearby brother, Sirius, but after examining it personally, he determined it was only reacting to a very subtle link, almost invisible if you did not have the eyes for it. Whoever was controlling this thread was very clever, very sneaky and had been at this game for a long time. The star the link was rooted near seemed an unremarkable system, with planets housing only simple elemental life, billions of years from ever being prepared to serve as a grounds for strategic warfare.

Raven regarded the star, named Sol, carefully for a moment before speaking. “Excuse me…might I have a word with you for a moment?”

Raven felt a soft pulse in the essence around him. A small flare jettisoned away from the surface of the star, and a voice answered in Raven’s mind. “Yes? Who are you?” Sol queried. “I am a lord of one of the neighboring planets in your brother star, Sirius.” Raven delivered the message he had carefully crafted before his journey here. Better not to raise alarms by revealing his true function. “Something in the regions around us is disrupting our wa. I have been sent to probe all of our neighbors and offer our assistance if you know of anything to be incorrect.”

A pause before speaking, the star replied “You may investigate. I do not know of any one here who would be the cause of your distress – your offer of assistance is appreciated but not understood to be of use at the moment.” He felt the star’s tension, a feeling of surprise mixed with confusion and sudden concern for his charges; 12 spheres drifting like fish eggs in the warmth of their star. Raven turned towards the first planet. Stars rarely cared about what anyone else looked like outside of their own little garden, but at the moment, Raven didn’t quite know who might be watching him so he decided to play the part of the Sirius ambassador on a routine check. Raven approached close to the first planet, a small cold black rock with three rocky child moons. Raven pressed his beak gently through the subtle aura of the sleeping planet and scanned the core for any signs of tears or holes in the essence. There was nothing. He glanced back to look over the other sleeping bodies. There were about a dozen planets, and hundreds of moons. Raven sighed, expelling his sense of urgency with a breath of consciousness. This was going to take some time.


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Niguma dismounted her steed and wiped the ashes from her armor, preparing to make her report. Pausing for a moment to breathe in the cold winter air, she ascended the black marble steps of the palace citadel. The soft echoes of her silk boots echoed between the imposing white granite columns, the only sound indicating life in a walkway lined with rigid guards in shining breastplates. Beautiful, self-absorbed creatures, she loathed them…mostly. She was an elf too, by definition, like them in appearance and even in her firstborn origins on a planet now dead and gone for billions of generations. Those elves didn’t look like these ones, however. These were pale as maggots and just as eager to celebrate their civilization as maggots would on a pile of dung. Niguma chuckled at the thought as she passed the first gate Their leaders were weak and soft, a far cry from the hathori elves who had made the name of elf known throughout the galaxies as the best variety of life for happy planets.

Not this planet though, she noted in her mind. Niguma nodded to the guard at the gate to the inner sanctum, handing over her dagger, allowing a flash of the darkness in her eyes to show to the guard as he searched her for other weapons. She saw him recoil inwardly, though he made a good show of pretending not to notice. This king chose his guards well. She would never fit in with these people. Ever.

“His majesty is on the terrace, you are already expected.” The guard spoke the words nonchalantly, masking his nervousness.

“Kuroyagi!” Niguma shouted across to the figure standing between the long grey curtains of the enormous doorway. She grinned, eager to....



(I have other things to write atm, so I can't finish this now, but I know the rest of the story like the back of my hand)

Kuroyagi
05-21-2007, 11:35 PM
"You're a better writer than you are a secretary", Kuroyagi said and there was no condescension in his voice. She hated it.

"But dont let this bother you.", he continued. "At least you dont have to hide yourself behind gilden walls of philosophy and poetry so to make an impression." There was much wisdom in those words. "Maybe, she thought, I wont kill him. After all he is a good king....maybe I shouldnt do it- Yet."

:laugh:

Btw, good stuff. Dont let this post bother you, continue with the story- I'm looking forward to it. :)

Naomi
05-22-2007, 06:55 AM
lol ;)

Naomi
05-27-2007, 07:11 PM
"You're a better writer than you are a secretary", Kuroyagi said and there was no condescension in his voice. She hated it.

"But dont let this bother you.", he continued. "At least you dont have to hide yourself behind gilden walls of philosophy and poetry so to make an impression." There was much wisdom in those words. "Maybe, she thought, I wont kill him. After all he is a good king....maybe I shouldnt do it- Yet."

:laugh:

Btw, good stuff. Dont let this post bother you, continue with the story- I'm looking forward to it. :)

Niguma said, "Father, arn't secretaries supposed to be used for writing?"

His majesty smirked and added dryly, "No, you just drape them on things on occasion, or lean them against the wall, like a room fixture. Or perhaps you could hang them from the ceiling. You know, come to think of it, I could probably use a few secretaries now that the war is over."

Niguma raised an eyebrow and said "So when do I get to leave this dull grey planet?"

"Soon, actually, I've just spoken with an old friend who tells me he's discovered where Sach Kand is hiding."

Niguma blinked "You're not serious, are you?"

"Never." he laughed. "But yes, if you wish to sign on for the mission I've reccomended you for a major intelligence position - and -" he paused, savoring her suspens..."it's a phase 1 system - serpent based planet."

Nigum grinned. "I shall accept, and leave immediately."

Kuroyagi smiled back, knowing how long she had worked to find an oppurtunity like this.. "So do you want to do the honors, or shall I?"

"Well your idiots have taken all of my weapons, so you might as well. Do you have an axe?"

Kuroyagi rolled his eyes. "Still into the gruesome bloody deaths are we? Can't we do it my way?"

"Of course! It's no difficulty at all." Kuroyagi knew she was only behaving because she was geting her way. She could be such a spoiled princess. "Alright, when you ascend, head up to our star and I'll have someone transfer you to the preserver realm where you can speak with Lord Azzrrainn." Niguma nodded, and Kuroyagi took her hand gently, put his arm around her waist, and with a rarely used thought, opened the way to the land of death. "Goodbye Prince Charming." giggled Niguma. Her body went limp and he felt the pulse of the energy released expand outwards. With a sigh, he lifted the body onto the nearby couch. For once, no mess to clean up.

Kuroyagi
05-27-2007, 09:45 PM
I must confess that I liked the last one better from an artistic point of view, but the content is interesting at least, and maybe someone else was guiding your hand, anyway- so its ok I guess. :rofl:

Naomi
05-27-2007, 09:57 PM
Perceptive bastard.

Kuroyagi
05-27-2007, 11:40 PM
not at all- its obvious...but one neednt be perceptive to see that the last comment came unmediated, straight from yourself. lol.

my best regards-->

Kuroyagi
06-12-2007, 09:08 PM
Hey Akasha! tell your lil "Enkil" to move on..lol

Naomi
06-12-2007, 09:30 PM
That was cryptic, even for you!!!

Yeah, fuck you Enki!!!!

I like your new avatar K :D

Kuroyagi
06-12-2007, 09:39 PM
yes ive finally found one that fits the forum and that I can still tolerate myself..;)

juts for info: with akasha and enkil I was also referring to the anne rice paradigm...

Naomi
06-13-2007, 06:24 PM
You know, this thread just struck me as hilarious for a whole new reason, I think Sebastian must have outdone himself.

I want to write now but I have to paint, you should write some K, I'm tired of entertaining you!:)

^_^