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Luke Saint
07-11-2007, 12:22 PM
Her Hair
7/21/03

What color was her hair?
The texture changes as the hue erupts into a frenzy of climatic perceptions.
Touches are tasted and smiled upon.
Colors are wasted and piled on.
Excess denies success of a perfect world.
Under the light the color is pale.
But fear not, it's only yourself that you can fail.
For upon what sullen vow did you deem yourself worthy of humanity?
Give up on me, I failed you.
Give up on me, I'm not worth it.
It's all addictions in my head "I know."
But all these thoughts just came too slow.
I'm sorry I did you wrong.
I was your bird that flew away
Like a soft West Wind out to play.
I am the shadow at the edge of your mind.
Ignore me, it only helps me withdraw farther.
What was God thinking when he gave me life?
Was it just a fluke or a nagging wife?
"Send out one to see the worst."
Give up on me, I broke my word.
Give up on me, I'm a wretch.
Give up on me, I deserve death.
If I had super powers for one day,
I woud fly up to Heaven and punch God in the face.
Isolated, lonely, alone, solo, incomplete:
I am the bass line of a song called 'Thinking'.
Do you want me to sing or play the guitar,
Degenerate myself to the state of a puppet?
NO MORE!
...If only I would have said to her, "I like your hair."

Naomi
07-11-2007, 04:15 PM
I like it, it's depressing.

If there was no god to punch I guess I'd settle for all the angels in heaven and make them my bitch.

:)

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 01:56 PM
I like it, it's depressing.

If there was no god to punch I guess I'd settle for all the angels in heaven and make them my bitch.

:)

I agree. And some of those angels wear their robes so tight....

Naomi
07-12-2007, 02:04 PM
Ah you just reminded me of my favorite graphic novels of all time- it's about this angel in a reality where all angels are hot babes who wear metal bikinis. Anyways she's a galactically renowned demon hunter but she ends up falling in love with one of the demon lords she's out to kill and they sleep together, then she gets kicked out of heaven.

Anyways I love Todd McFarlane's stories. I think they kept me sane when I was surviving my parental figures. ^_^

I'll donate a pretty picture to your pretty poetry page.

http://www.cybercomicsandtoys.com/backissues/images/image/Angela1.JPG

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 02:10 PM
If it wasn't as cute as it is I would have nightmares. Thanks Naomi. Peace.

Naomi
07-12-2007, 02:44 PM
Dude you are so laid back. That is awesome.

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 05:04 PM
Now you want a piece of me?!? LOLOL

Naomi
07-12-2007, 05:42 PM
I have to work the dramaticism out first, it's all part of the tamamo-no-mae theatre arts....

,,,^. . ^,,,

but sure....do you like dirty orange planets?

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 09:32 PM
The dirtier and the oranger the better. : ) *sticks tongue out* Yes ma'am!!

Naomi
07-12-2007, 09:37 PM
Oh good. Well the orange chakra is the fun chakra yknow ^_^

I think Mars probably tastes like cinnamon. It looks like it does anyways....

Certainly not cheese...

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 09:39 PM
Nah, cheese is for the moon is it not? Cinammon however, it would go well with my sugar!!! : P

Naomi
07-12-2007, 09:59 PM
You know, I kind of like to think of the moon as being composed of piles of loose lancome eyeshadow in shadows of silver and black.

Cheese is really gross, and it comes from a cow's tits. I mean ew!

OMG its good though! And its orange. :(

You should come in the chatroom sometime because then people won't know how weird I am permanently.

Luke Saint
07-12-2007, 10:13 PM
You know, I kind of like to think of the moon as being composed of piles of loose lancome eyeshadow in shadows of silver and black.

Cheese is really gross, and it comes from a cow's tits. I mean ew!

OMG its good though! And its orange. :(

You should come in the chatroom sometime because then people won't know how weird I am permanently.
But we love weirdness!! PM me where this chatroom is!!